My 3 movies...

08-04-2005, 05:02 PM

I would like to post three flash movies I made...One's crappy to me, one has no point (just some eye-candy), and one's pretty good.

Lend a Helping Hand (the crappy one)

Random (the eye-candy)

The Runaway (the pretty good one)

Enjoy!! Please submit at least one of these on the front page!!!

BTW, the width is supposed to be 550, and the length is supposed to be 400. Please fix this. THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

rehabisforquitters · 08-04-2005, 11:07 PM

okay, I'm replying...

Drunken_Shinobi · 08-05-2005, 12:03 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fyaishar

I would like to post three flash movies I made...One's crappy to me, one has no point (just some eye-candy), and one's pretty good.

Lend a Helping Hand (the crappy one)

Random (the eye-candy)

The Runaway (the pretty good one)

Enjoy!! Please submit at least one of these on the front page!!!

BTW, the width is supposed to be 550, and the length is supposed to be 400. Please fix this. THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

...somebody please reply...

So...you submitted to ABS already?

Snow · 08-05-2005, 10:49 AM

I think Random would be good with some more color

The eye cany was cool except for the end, plus it was a bit slow. THe first one was yeah, kinda crappy.

God · 08-05-2005, 11:08 AM

They all didn't make much sense. But, I've seen worse here. Anyone remember Dildo Guy?.

treefalse · 08-05-2005, 12:24 PM

Well, at the hamster part at the end of random, make them dance in time with the music, to get the best effect.

08-06-2005, 01:01 PM

Thanks everybody. I am just starting flash, but do you see how the animations get slightly better?

08-06-2005, 01:07 PM

I Know Some Flash Websites...But I Forgot..

Charles rules you all! · 08-06-2005, 01:14 PM

they're good, but i think you are obsest with that little line you have in all of them...really good though

08-24-2005, 05:33 PM

I'm not obsessed, I just like 'em. BTW, my website is www.freewebs.com/theflashworld . Enjoy!

08-25-2005, 12:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fyaishar

I would like to post three flash movies I made...One's crappy to me, one has no point (just some eye-candy), and one's pretty good.
Lend a Helping Hand (the crappy one)
Random (the eye-candy)
The Runaway (the pretty good one)
Enjoy!! Please submit at least one of these on the front page!!!

BTW, the width is supposed to be 550, and the length is supposed to be 400. Please fix this. THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Im still grumpy about my stuff not getting in last update, but I'll try and be as fair as possible when reviewing:

Lend a helping hand:

The first thing I see was the cliche'd dot thingy they have in "green, blue and purple" cartoons. You should try something else, or maybe if you had started flash earlier you would be able to make the dot thing without it become a cliche. The animation was okay, but I had no idea that the house was on fire (Dark red for fire???) until the final scene. I didn't hate it, but it won't make the front page. Forget about this one and move on to better things...

The runaway:

Hated it. Just an excuse for more random dots and a bit of shape tweening. The 65 cent ending was stupid too.

Random:

The credits opening put me off it ("Bob productions presents: Random" OH THE ORIGINALITY) but once the fast food logos came in I was hooked. It had heaps of potential, but the inanimate hamsters that barely vibrate at the end ruined it. If you remake it with the hamsters dancing and give a MUCH better name, this one would be cool, and even front page worth (Of Albinoblacksheep- they love animutation toons there)

08-25-2005, 12:57 AM

those were ok..

08-25-2005, 02:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ilikepandas

Im still grumpy about my stuff not getting in last update, but I'll try and be as fair as possible when reviewing:

Lend a helping hand:

The first thing I see was the cliche'd dot thingy they have in "green, blue and purple" cartoons. You should try something else, or maybe if you had started flash earlier you would be able to make the dot thing without it become a cliche. The animation was okay, but I had no idea that the house was on fire (Dark red for fire???) until the final scene. I didn't hate it, but it won't make the front page. Forget about this one and move on to better things...

The runaway:

Hated it. Just an excuse for more random dots and a bit of shape tweening. The 65 cent ending was stupid too.

Random:

The credits opening put me off it ("Bob productions presents: Random" OH THE ORIGINALITY) but once the fast food logos came in I was hooked. It had heaps of potential, but the inanimate hamsters that barely vibrate at the end ruined it. If you remake it with the hamsters dancing and give a MUCH better name, this one would be cool, and even front page worth (Of Albinoblacksheep- they love animutation toons there)

Thanks for the constructive critisism, I'll use that.

View Poll Results: Which is your favorite?
Random	5	55.56%
Lend a Helping Hand	2	22.22%
The Runaway	2	22.22%
Voters: 9. You may not vote on this poll

08-05-2005, 12:24 PM	#6
treefalse Super-Tree Tournaments Won: 1 Local Time: 06:36 PM Local Date: 05-20-2013 Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: The golden state. Age: 21 Posts: 3,179 Casino Cash: $475	Well, at the hamster part at the end of random, make them dance in time with the music, to get the best effect. Last edited by treefalse; 08-05-2005 at 01:33 PM.

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fyaishar Guest Tournaments Won: 1 Posts: n/a Casino Cash: $	Thanks everybody. I am just starting flash, but do you see how the animations get slightly better?

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Charles rules you all! My kitty Local Time: 07:36 PM Local Date: 05-20-2013 Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Some where near a tree. Age: 22 Posts: 2,226 Casino Cash: $111	they're good, but i think you are obsest with that little line you have in all of them...really good though

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fyaishar Guest Tournaments Won: 1 Posts: n/a Casino Cash: $	I'm not obsessed, I just like 'em. BTW, my website is www.freewebs.com/theflashworld . Enjoy!

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