Song about Gprime.

[diet poop]

Does anyone remember how a long time ago i said i would write a song about Gprime? Well i started writing it and it turned ito a song that had absolutely NOTHING to do with gprime. Tell me what you think, We in the band are still writing the music for it, but here are the lyrics.

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Five Minutes of Freedom
Written by: diet poop
inspiration by: Gprime

Your Five Minutes of Freedom Start...NOW!
(guitar)
I don't have to listen to
Your stupid laws and stupid rules

What ever happened to freedom of choice?
Why can't anyone hear my voice?
You think that you can rule my mind
Well listen and you soon will find
That I can see what's going on
You think that I'm another pawn
But I won't play your messed up game,

I'm going someplace far away.

(chorus-start slow)
But even when I think I'm out
They drag me right back down again.
They'll gouge your eyes out, make you blind
They just want to satisfy
Their hunger for a few more souls
For them to reach their evil goal.

They hide the truth,
They lie and cheat,
They'll steal the floor beneath your feet.
It does not help to make believe
And tell yourself it's just a dream.
What's happening is very real,
It causes all the pain you feel.
It weighs you down,
Day by day,

I'm going someplace far away.

(chorus)
But even when I think I'm out
They drag me right back down again.
They'll gouge your eyes out, make you blind
They just want to satisfy
Their hunger for a few more souls
For them to reach their evil goal.

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I think I will dedicate the song to Gprime, since it is what i started writing it about in the first place

wow, very nice. How long did that take you?

ne ways good job.

[gussa]

dat is really good. wat is it sung to? anyway it is really good :):):)

[diet poop]

well we havent finished writing the music yet, but its gonna be proformed at a school dance on the 10th, i record it and post it
i actually wrote it all in one night :p

nyce.

[john]

that's very cool diet_poop!

now..... who will volunteer to sing it? :D

you want to know the funny thing about this? well poop pmed me like 6 months ago about this, But its doesnt matter now because it DONE.

that is a very cool song

Thumbs up!
Record it but on quick time so i can see, but very nice but wat is the toon?

[diet poop]

Originally Posted by bagel head

Thumbs up!
Record it but on quick time so i can see, but very nice but wat is the toon?

lol, we're still writing the tune, and the dance that we're supposed to preform it at is TOMORROW NIGHT! heehee, we be rushing now. We actually havent even started writing the tune yet, we might just ad lib it. Or use the tune from some ska song.

[gussa]

bagelhead wat is with your new avvy and sig? is there a new fight or do you just feel like a makeover?

It's good and everything, I just don't see what it has to do with gprime.

[Heyyou27]

Originally Posted by nickychris3

It's good and everything, I just don't see what it has to do with gprime.

It's been more than 4 months since the last post in this thread.

So?

Originally Posted by nickychris3

So?

she doesnt know how to read dates yet, go easy on her.


lyrics w/o music are like bad poetry. so there's no way to tell how good it is.

I'm just bringing old threads back.

[treefalse]

Originally Posted by murderbydeath

lyrics w/o music are like bad poetry. so there's no way to tell how good it is.

Well said. I like to make my own tune as I read it...

i read it to a alkaline trio song and it was good.