Hey this is my first flash i've ever made (i'm takin a class on it) so yea.

I think the people should move their arms and legs.

uh....

Get your money back.

Get your money back.lol...

I want to say something nice and encouraging, but that had no redeeming value at all.

Why are people so lazy with Flash these days?

I took me 20 min to make this work and I don't think it deserved my time.

Why are people so lazy with Flash these days?its always been that way.

But at LEAST move the arms and legs. Look at my first flash!

Eh you'll do better next time

Horrible.
I didn't look at it, but I can tell two things:
-The flash was awful
-You won't be back here to check my reply

That's even worse than what mine are...

No.

It's not as bad as everyone says. Seeing as it's your first flash and you're kinda just learning the basics I'll give you some constructive criticism.


It needs to have a little more variety
Have the people move their arms and legs and maybe give the weapons, etc. to spice it up
Once it's better, make it longer because this was only about 20 seconds long
Make it have sound or music

It absolutely needs sound/music.

I think my first flash was a ball that moved across the screen. At least you drew something =P. And isn't vomit hard to animate!? O_o I tried it once, didnt come out too good.

my first flash was a cat that got zapped by a ufo the the ufo made a pokeball (remember those?) and fleww away......
it was in colour too...