The thread with poetry in it! Yay! I dunno why I'm making this, I just felt like it.



Given the moment
The time and the place
contentment and joy
We had to make haste

Four days had past
the tension was high
light as a feather
fly up to the sky

Terror was certain
their glasses askew
another one wasted
but only a few

not one for murder
I fled from the scene
the police surrounded
they had to be keen

I felt the long barrel
the trigger so cold
they came in the house
and "come out!" they told

Nothing was right
I felt this was wrong
the gun in my hands
I ended this song

uhmmmmm.....

um k

Well f.ucking post something other than, "uhh...." and, "okay...."
Don't come to the thread to say stupid s.hit like that. If you want to post poetry, then do so. If not, F.UCK OFF!

uhmm well it ok..... i guesss

Someday
Yesturday
Today
Tuesday
Friday...

Poem?

that was really good rehab
u should try to publish that or something
at the end, if u don't mind me asking, did the person shoot themselves or the cops?

anywho, keep this up and u'll get some money for publishing it

I just made it one night. And the person in the end didn't kill any cops. He, "capped" himself lol.