So sonic walkes out of a bar (drunk off hiss butt!)and was walking home when he saw a kid walking his dog the dogs name is chocolate.Sonic sartes punhing the kid but weakle and thay hardly hit beacous he was drunk,the kid got so enowed that he ordered the dog to atack sonic!Chocolate bit sonic leg and sonic tryed to run chocolate off but it made matters worse.the dog riped of his leg then the sonic stared to folow but died beacyse of lossing all his blood.Finaly killed hime sead John luke(thats me!) :Confuzzleed yet?
I that so.. bea making more fan flickes soon!

Is there a point to that story?

yes,,, NEVER trust sonic or his dumb pales

no offecnce but it sucked i gave it a 1

That may be the worst story I've ever read. I actually heard my IQ drop when I finished reading that. I can see my IQ on the floor now...*sigh*

That wasn't even worth the 12 seconds it took to read. Hey I have a story.

Once apon a time Mario went to a bar. He got drunk, got in a fight. He then died of cancer. The end

that one was better than the sonic one

I've heard funnier stories of 'Nam.

well put firedove, THAT SUCKED!!..........no offense

I gave up trying to read that.
Go play outside little boy.

Age: 11
it would take someone around 11 to find that funny i know i am only 12 but still no one could find that funny unless they are extremely immature more immature than me because i hate that story

it gives me a headache trying to figure out what all those typos/misspellings are supposed to be

i wonder who voted not bad- 6/10!

and hows this related to games?

i wonder who voted not bad- 6/10!

and hows this related to games?
the guy that made the ****ty story

and i has sonic in it

it was me and i thought it was reffering to the clay ppl in the vcr thing(he had a pic of it on his post) but yeah it was me

I gave it a 3 because I always encourage young people to write and use their imagination. If you want to be a great writer look into improving your grammar and spelling though. Good luck with further work!