ok, so im writing a short story for english homework, and it's about the dangers of shaving your tongue, and this guy had got his tongue caught on his tongue and all this stuff happens, so the people are operating on him and tha razor (electric) takes over his mind and he wants to kill stuff and stuff,
so what i need is for you guys to suggest where the story goes, it has to bee suitible for all ages and stuff tho... :smokeing1

well teh guy could start going completely mad and turn into a serial killer and there coudl be a bit where its like phsyco but the guy has a shaver and is gona attack some1 in the shower(shower part teh same)

How about the guy is getting a dental operation and they use a razor something posses him and he steals the razor and kills the dentist

You could add a twist and say it was all a twisted dream by a mental patient that played catch the 2ton brick when he was younger and named himself WTF on the Gprime forums.

Tounge shaving? lol

I guess you could turn him into a madman...

OR, you could just make this person overly obsessed about shaving, and he/she will soon eventually shave him/her entire self before realizing his/her fault. I dunno...

Considering where you have gone with this story it will be very hard to make it for all ages.

he can go into the bathroom and slit his rists while sitting in a bath tub full of water. !CHILDREN LOVE SUICIDE!

i think ill make it so that he goes crazy and has to destroy all the hair in the world, how's that sound?

How long does this story have to be?

500 to 1000 words, ive got about 200 words so far.

he can go into the bathroom and slit his rists while sitting in a bath tub full of water. !CHILDREN LOVE SUICIDE!
u got that from stephen kings "IT" :smokeing1

Why does it have to be about the dangers of shaving your tounge?

why not? (i have to write this part to fill in the space)

OK. How about this. He cuts his tounge and loses alot of blood. Then, he has a "neat death expierience" and has to do something......I don't know where I'm going with this.

ok, ive got about 600 words now and the guy has turned into a slave of the razor and he is shaving everyone's heads and the us airforce are there and the dog catcher and the ambo's and police and old people and a rip off of comic book guy from the simpsons called " cartoon strip dude" and there all there to help catch him and stuff and stuff...

did that make sense?

idea:

razor turns into a razor blade, cuts off his tongue, and goes with the razor and runs away to hide from the guy who wants to sell his tongue for a golden tongue, nah, that's retarted

the razor turns into the guy and they go around and claim that they're twins and should have special treatment, someone spies on them and sees the twin turn back into a razor, boasts about their find to the people, they attack him, take the razor, and cast it into Hell

much better

ive finished the story with 1111 words.
thanks for your suggestions, they helped me.

can we see the final product?

Woohooo! Now just give it the Velma and Loise ending except with the razor and the dude.

can we see the final product?
yeah, ill make another topic without the headings and stuff of the story, maybe people could rate it?

like crispy toast sed but with the electric shave in with him. :mf_trombo

I can help you! Here's what you do...

Take what you have...

And burn it, for the betterment of mankind.

Then go and think up a much less cliché plot.